The new world
Prologue 1
In a time the clans live in harmony, when all the trees just stood around, and the prey was plentiful, and the kits grew into proud and happy warriors. But times have called when their was war, then needless kill was brought in to devistating creations known as a clan killer. But once the threat was taken away and brought to an end, the clans once again lived in harmony. But two other clans are still unknown to the shells and dust, and new threats are still in their way as two sided stories will play part into a deadly plan....
"dont let her get away! Kill the traitor!" yoled a toms voice as a bluish Grey she-cat runs through the rain, sploshing against the wet sand as a wave takes over. She was already out of breath and horror through her eyes like the terror of facing death as a kit mewed in her mouth. It eyes still closed and wildly danlging in her mouth, meewling.
"dont let her get away, she will kill us all" the tom was getting closer, claws unsheath along with another beside him with claws so sharp but never retracted.
She slide under a curved tree and jumped over a broken branch with the kit. Then "Got ya!" a claw rose out in front of her in the bushes and with the flash of lightning, her face was clawed, dropping the kit against the boulder and wails from hitting its head against the hard rock.
"please why are you doing this...gnn" She backs away and dashs for her kit as her opponent claws her back.
"the point is obvious, your lies and treatchery will end us all like the predictions would be told, you must be killed" he yowled.
This battle grew dim and the two cats fought for several thunderclaps, till blood trickled through the bushes and the she-cat popped out. Her legg dangling from her forepaw. The storm started to let up and heavily panting she saw a dry patch of grass. "d-dont cry my sweet..." she limped over to a patch of wet tangles of grass and material brought from the ocean shore. She places the kit in the set, still wailing from the painful blow, she gave a few firm licks and placed her nose over it, "I pray you will be safe....please be a good girl... I love you so much" as she wraps the grass over her kit, she runs into the direction were the cats have chased her... and never came back.
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Shellclan
It was finally the ending of spring when the air began to get warme and the sun started to become more fierce and powerful than it ever was .
Many new kits were born at the time and they live happily without knowing any danger was near, and four of them played a whole new role into this story , starting with a bluish grey she-cat. "Hey Mirrorpaw" Salttail pad up trying to jump from boulder to bolder, heavily slippng her paws on the way down. "Mirrorpaw?" once Salttail finally went to th top she was panting, her blank green gaze still looking at the ground, "you know these old bones cant get up on this ledge like it use to you know" she stood their, looking like the bluish grey cat was ignoring her but at one point she was probably gazing out in sleep. "Mirrorpaw!"
She jumped, her fur bristling like a fox just krept up on her, "Wha...how!" she was looking up feeling the sun from her face, "But I was frozen and it felt like...."
"What are you doing" said Salttail, as Mirrorpaw turns, ears twitching.
Salttail was the Skywatcher of the clans, for so many moons she has served her clan into predicting weather and foretold glimpses of important past and future happenings of their world, "Salttail, how long have you been standing their!" she gasped, "Im sorry I must have stayed to long, I didnt mean to miss trai-" Salttail gave out a murrow in laughter, "What is it?"
"Mirrorpaw, you need no more training, cause you have exceded the next level in skywatching"
Chapter 1 the game
"What really!" she tries to move but then leaps and smashes to the ground head first, "why does my body feel like it asleep" she mewed.
"that will happened sometimes, afterall you have been in virgil since the moon was down and right now as you can feel" she looks up, "the sun is already up" she pointed out.
"But I was only their for several heartbeats, and their were visions and"
"that is normal, but dont tell me them yet" he places her tail over her nose, telling her to follow, "you still have a long ways to go before your ready to become a full skywatcher"
"but dont you wish to become a warrior sometimes?" she asked, but salttail didnt reply, "I,ve heard about the stories were you use to fight along side others, how did you become one yourself"
She gave out a sigh, "it was a very long time ago, I was able to see at the time. But when my eyes were taken out by my own age, starclan gave me a new road into this world...but you though" she turns at her and gazes down. "you were born this way, starclan has given you this gift for a reason"
"but how can being blind be a gift, I mean honestly" for all that she knows when she was a tiny kit, she was always known to be Salttails apprentice.
"everything cannot be seen by the naked eye, but the blind can see thing that no other mortal can, someday you will understand this, for it is not my power to tell you how to contract with the dead" Mirrorpaws eye widened from the sound of the dead.
"you mean I can speak to spirits and-" Salttail brushed her mouth with her tail.
"enough, that is something to dicuss when your older, maybe when your given your title, now get something to eat, then go to sleep, we have another session for the rising moon of the claw" he swishes her tail and dismisses me, "I would suggest talking to your brother Featherpaw, he is just about to be back from taining.
She angles her ears to strain from the foot prints and scents, then she picked up her brother who just stroled into the camp, from the diffeent smell he has brought back prey, a fish from the stream. "Featherpaw!" She races up to him and jumps around as he places the fish down.
He was a silver, brown, just like our father Falconfur. The biggest and strongest fighter the clan has got, "Always like a kit I see" he give her a lick behind the ear and shoves the fish beside her, "this is for ya, hope your hungery"
"ha this is amazing!, I was going to ask how you got it" she placed her teeth around it and rips it apart, "your lucky you get to do things like this"
"hehe it kills the time, but this was something I had to share and their was a funny story behind it" he looks over at his Mentor Groundtail who lashes his tail out, calling to him, "er...well maybe later, Seeya sis" he give her a quick lick behind the ear and raced off.
"hmm your so lucky..." she chewed up the rest of the fish and started to walk up to her den next to the medicine cat. Ever since i could remember as a kit, our medicine cat bondleaf has to be the most insane cat i have ever live with. She scream at random times and cause me to wake up in the middle of the night. At first i thought she was getting assasinated, then i though she was just gettng nightmare, then it got worse as if it was a sickness. "Bondleaf?..." I mewwed carefully into the den.
"who is it.." she mewed back hoarsely, like she was given white cough (low form of flu or virus), "oh... hey mirrorpaw, didnt reconize you in the sun light, how are you. Everything okay"
"everything is fine" I replied, "just wanted to see if you were doing fine"
"she stood back, feeling like she is looking away from my gaze, from the way she was breathing the turqiose she-cat seemed scared.
"No better no worse my young friend" she lies flat paw tuck underneath her, "the thoughts in my head are getting worse and everytime it is different, I dont wish to share it anymore. But, i know it mean something...i tried to talk to starclan in the moonstream..." she paused and looks down.
"what did they say? Or are you not allowed to tell me?" I asked hopefully to get some answers, but she shook her head.
"it was nothing, their was nothing, and the dream of the frest looked empty and voiceless, like a kit trapped underwater" she lays on her side looking up at the sun, "but you shouldnt worry so much, you have a long life to live in front of you young warrior"
"warriors?, hehe Im a skywatcher not a warrior" I purred.
"not in my eyes your not just a skywatcher" she give me lick one the head which i figgited away. "now go I need to concentrate" With a curt nod I left the den and went into my den. Me a warrior, common I dont think I would know if I tried. I thought and laid in my nest which is crumpled up by Salttail's. I hope someday I would be able to join the others.....someday....
As she rested, the sun was almost fully up and the cats began to form out seeing, and new characters would be introed to this story....
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"alright everything in plan?" said a pale light grey tome with a spiky tail gathering around two other cats . The tom started drawing his nail around the sand/ dirt mixed ground, trying to draw out a map "we will flank him around and try to dodge his approach through the curvy trees we saw just ten foxlengths away", he points at a blue fured cat with blue eyes, but taller than the rest with a shorter tail, "Scalepaw, you will act as a Diversion, get his attention by-"
"hold on Wolfpaw" a genger she-cat stood closer to the croud, and started messing with the doodle, "wouldnt it be better if we lead him away from the camp, or maybe cause a silent provok to make him run towards the enemy than to scare him?" she mewed, sounding a little nervous.
"Thats what I just said Reedpaw, now as Scale paw will lead the diversion to us and we will be hidden in the trees" suddenly Reedpaw raised her tail, "*sigh, yes Reedpaw..." she started to claw the ground in annoyance.
Reedpaw looked away in emarrisement, "I...um... I dont know how to climb well" Wolfpaw gave out a growl.
"For starclan sake I thought you said you practiced it before!" he yowled as Scalepaw press wolfpaw's muzzle down.
"Be quiet, do you want to give out our position?" Scalepaw whispered, he was always the quiet one, but seemed knowledgeable at best.
"Alright, change in plans, Reedpaw iwill need you to be ground patrol, you will be next to the tree I will climb up and act as a second diversion, while you and scalepaw corner him out I will jump on top of him and-" Reedpaw raise her tail again, "For starclan sake dont tell me you cant walk?"
"just wondering were we corner him, this is an open space" Now Reedpaw was always the nervous one in the clan, everything is a question to her and she will awy secong guess herself in the events that are given.
"just target him to were i can see him" he points at Scalepaw, "Got it?" Scalepaw nodded and for a few heartbeats later Reedpaw did the same with an excessive nodded, "alright lets split, I will be over their and you find him scalepaw, you are our best tracker" they all split away, Reedpaw stopped ten fox lengths away like he said and Scalepaw dissappeared through the heavy lenths of leaves.
From the distance I could see Reedpaw trembling a bit and shuffling her paws while in a hunters crouch, "quite moving you mouse hearted fool" I whispered as a huge shuffling sound rose from deep into the forest. After that things grew silent as something caught Reedpaws eyes and jimps into action, the bushed shuffle and a small yowled took place as Reedpaw ran off towards me, giving out a small wail. "Perfect, nice diversion to give your opponent off" I was ready to spring and jump down until I felt vibration forg on the branch I was standing on.
"Maybe if you were to take your tatics a bit more...secretly I wouldnt be able to find you all in a line" I gasped and turned around seeing a black cat sticking his toungue out, "Howdy"
"Darkspirit!" before I could fully speak he knocks me off the tree and falls two tail lengths down to the dirt ground and getting pinned by a golden pelt she-cat Sunshine, "fox- dung!" i squirmed around but she held me down, "argh! No fair!" she gave a murrow of amusement as she lift her paws off.
Reedpaw, jumps out of the bushes, scuffling her paws in shame, "we lost..." she said, sighing as Scalepaw jumps over on of the trees, shaking dirt from his next.
"Reedpaw you gave us away" Scalepaw stood forward ,"you yowled at my position! I was trying to run away till you told me to 'look out', honestly" she flew her ears back, her nervousness taking over.
"I..I didnt mean, I was just trying to help he was going to jump right on you", she defensed in an almost whispering tone.
"and what reward did you get out of this, you got your pelt busted thats what" Wolfpaw growled.
"I did not!, i ran back like you told me to, I was following orders" Reedpaw told Wolfpaw.
"why did I have such an idiotic sister, honestly if this was real we would have gotten killed because of you!" Wolfpaw kepts on as Scalepaw sighed waving his tail in impactience, their doing it again, he thought.
"well if you werent such a lousy climber, maybe he wouldnt even know you were up in a tree, hidding your gray face" She scouled.
"A lousy climber!? You couldnt even climb at all!" he defended.
"yeah like standing two tail lengths in the air on this-" She points her tail at a stick that probably scalepaw could reach, "-is a way to clim trees?"
Scalepaw stood closer at the two noisy cats, Sunshine and Darkspirit were staring at them with annoyance, "We shouldnt be fighting, we should be thinking what we have done wrong-"
"What do you think this is about!" they spoke at the same time and pointed at Scalepaw.
"seriously do you think she would fit to be a warrior?" He asked as Reedpaw gave out a hiss at her brother.
"honostly brother if we all keep on acting like this we all wont be warriors, now can we just think about this in a more appropriate manner, I think our mentors would be umm... a little angery dont you think" he points at Sunshine and Darkspirit just gazing at us with shaking heads.
He gave out a short growl, "sometimes I hate it when your right-" he looks at Reedpaw, "but this isnt over" she stuck her toungue out at him and the litter walks back to their mentors, Skywater was Scalepaw's mentor, but he couldnt be around due to other duties he had to attend.
"Sigh, ive only had you for two moons and yet you two still fight like the bothersome kits you were before" Darkspirit looks at Wolfpaw, his growl still hidden behind his tight shut mouth.
Then Sunshine gave him a light shove, "ahh you were a troublesome kit yourself back then, remember the time you were trying to best me about who could catch the most prey" she gave out a laugh.
"uhh you always said you were the best hunter in the forest" he replied, Wolfpaw was a bit annoyed and followed his gaze around the area trying to find something to occupy his time while they went back to the camp were it was much warmer than the dirt pile.
"And you were so mad when I got so much more than you when we were both going through our apprenticeship" she gloated.
"Hmph well I bet you couldnt run as fast as you can eat" he shot back.
"what do you mean by that" she growled.
"nothing..." he gave a short purr and saw Reedpaw jump from something up ahead.
"what is that?" she mewed.
"what is what?" Wolfpaw traced down her stare and saw nothing, "I dont see anything moving?"
"not that?" she point her tail at a bark tree, "something is odd about it" she breaks from the group and waddles up to the large tree, her paws are short, scalepaw thought as Wolfpaw gave an expression at him saying, told ya so.
"quit it" Scalepaw spoke quietly, "Reedpaw dont wonder so far" he follows her trail up on the tree and saw Reedpaw gazing up at it.
"Its huge!" she places her paw on the branch, claws open, it was a rough out edge of a giant claw mark, "were did this come from"
"Wow what is that!" Wolfpaw jumps out almost landing on top of Reedpaw.
"Watch it!" she hissed
"you watch it!" he looks over at the claw mark on the tree as Darkspirit and Sunshine make their way up, slowly. "So this is what you have been staring at, at first i thought you were going nuts like Bondleaf" he laughed.
"Why you!" she barroled over him and they wrestled away from the claw mark. Scalepaw jumps up to the root that stuck out, making it easier to see the markings that made it.
"you guys?" he turned his head and notice they were too occupied by their rivalry, then he turned his head back and tilts his head. "it looks so familiar..." he leans closer and could sense something from it, suddenly things went quiet all around him and from the faintest winds he thought he could hear a very...very light voice. What is this feeling, its like its calling to me...hello who are you-, as soon as he placed his paw on the mark, things went nto a bang of images, flasheds about the past and, roaring blood raging through this forest. Stone...who was Stone; A goliath cat?... Ashclaw...Teatherclaw! My father?!..Iceshade?...what is this what is all this, were am I. He digs his claws into the wood, suddenly their was a stop, a pale of grey dust sweeped from the darkness as the dawn risen showing red sand... and through that sand was a hint of blood, the sand was made of blood!...
"This is only the beginning, but the end will be closer, unless you can find the missing clan members" what was that?... Clan members, "other worlds will be part of this, you cannot deny what awaits your clanmates" suddenly their was a flash and the whole area was covered in cats, dead, some torn apart, I stood their in horror, watching as some of them were still alive but too hurt to live through their last breath. Get me out of here!, he yowled but nothing came as at the end of a hill of what looks like a giant shiney cold ground of stone stood Six cats, one of them stood forward, "beware of this one to your friends.." he stood over a moving body, crawled up to him and gave out a sort wail. The dawn sun drowned out his appearance, but his claws were extended to an unatural state. Ahhh! Let go!
"you have a destiny to send out a message to the clans, you may be the few who will gve us our final hope" it was a frail voice but for that second it sounded like a she-cat. When I stared back out in horror, the long nailed cat raised out his claws and slashed him open like he was just useless prey. Then everything went to darkness and I finally got my claw hole off the wooden bark. Rolling twice away and panting.
"Scalepaw are you okay!" Sunshine swept by my side and looked at my eyes, still shock from the visions. Wolfpaw and Reedpaw stopped fighting and looked at me.
"Scalepaw whats up?" Darkspirit looked at him serously, but I shook my head and stared back at him.
"it was nothing...but what is this?" Darkspirit didnt stop his gaze at him, but then looks up at the claw mark and gives out a short growl.
"wow that was a long time ago, cant belive i havent placed my eyes on this", she looks up at the clawmark and jumps up at the root, "wow scalepaw you must have a strong hold of things, theirs a deep hold at the side of this claw mark" she scratches around t and looks at the top. "this must be how he made his boundary, or maybe it was when he missed a shot and smashed against this tree" she jumps back down and regroups with the others.
"sorry but who is it?" Wolfpaw interupted, being nudged by his sister.
"stop being so rude Wolfpaw" she nudged again as wolfpaw nudged back.
"Stone..." they all looked at Scalepaw and for a moment he looked like he was just staring at nothing, "A leapard cat, seven times our scale, who clashed a war against Dust and our oen clan, was on the threat to devistation" he looks at the crowed like something else was tugging at his voice, "a warning, yes their was a warning about this"he told them as he points at the claw mark, "Legend to tell for the Stone to rise from hell, it was a story, no a legend that killed maybe a half dozen cats... a cold killer at best...but" he stood to the side, Reedpaw and Wolfpaw looked at him in astonishment.
"I swear to starclan I have never seen him talk this much" Reedpaw whispered.
"and their is more" he was beginning to halucinate a bit, "a plot, yes their...their is a missing plot to this..a cat...several cats.... smart, unaturally a cat with long claws and sharp teeth and...and" suddenly Darkspirit pounced him over, giving an annoyed look.
"thats enough out of you, the elders have been giving you too many stories, and yet you make nightmares" he lets go and Scalepaw shook his head looking around.
"Nightmars about what?" he asked as Reedpaw jumps in excited.
"Scalepaw you have got to fill me in on that story, that was so cool!" Scalepaw tilted his head in confusion, "come on who told you, Ashclaw?"
yes it was ashclaw...he knew everything
"umm yeah it was Ashclaw, he told me everything" for a moment he thought another voice was taking over, then backed away and shook his head a bit.
"wow and what about dad? He might now another, uhh the missing plot you said...investigation on the way yes" she laughed and jumped around.
Wolfpaw gave out a yawn, "honestly can we just go home now, Im about to fall flat on my stomach hearing about your curiosity..."
"at least he had interest, common wolfpaw dont you want to find out" she pleaded, but Wolfpaw shook his head.
"meh Id rather eat crowfood" Sunshine cuffed him by the head.
"be nice to your sister, but he is right its getting late, lets go" she lead us on as the sun began to fall into a red dawn.
"w-wait what about our apprenticeship accessment?!" she mewwed to Sunshine.
Darkspirit kept his gaze on Scalepaw hearing him whisper, Stone to rise from hell, the stone to rise from hell..what does it mean, Severing,...
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Four cats have been shown promising wishes for this world, but their is yet one more in this clan that deserve the space to carry the scavenger of the great journey....
"Yawn* man I cant believe I went through all that trouble over one fish" Featherpaw stood bye his mentor, Groundtail, who was just finishing passing word from the patrol that went on over at the border, I have to admit, that was a long and very boring patrol, he looks away and saw the other cats back from combat practice...or was it an apprenticeship. Not sure but Reedpaw jumped around excited about something over Scalepaw who just look more tired than the rest. Wolfpaw who stood bye Sunshine and Darkspirit was being scolded bye his mentor, not sure about what. But it was not my business.... actually I didnt quit like him much. He was a bit of a violent type in my opinion.
"Featherpaw" his thought were interupted and he looks back at his mentor. "you can go on ahead and get along with your apprentices, but be sure to get rest soon, we have a hunting patrol in the morning"
Featherpaw stood up tall proud to have him as my mentor, let alone being chosen by the deputy, "Awesome! This will be a fun hunt I just know it!" he raced off for his friends, relieved that he wasnt in a clan were he was the only litter in the clan like dustclan, they only had one kit from what I hear. "hey whats going on guys" he topples over Wolfpaw, as Wolfpaw give him a playful bit on the shoulder to make him let go.
"ahh troublesome pest!" Wolfpaw hissed.
"Hey Featherpaw..." Reedpaw had her head down, looking at wolfpaw his anger face showed sign of fustration as well, Feathertail looked at Scalepaw and he seemed...well rarely expressionless.
"Reedpaw what the matter, whats going on?" I asked her calmly as she sighed and laid flat on the cool sand.
Wolfpaw youled with a fustrated growl, "We failed an asseccent thats what, and it was all her fault!" he kick sand from his hign claws as Reedpaw dug her face in shame. Scalepaw was still stunned at im not sure what,
"is he okay?" I asked Wolfpaw, pointing my tail at Scalepaw.
"Does it look like I care?!" he continued kicking the sand, "If anyone needs me I will be in my den" he walks off cursing to himself about the asseccment.
"I..nvr, gumble..wa" Reedpaw mumbled from under the sand.
"what?"Featheraw asked as she pops her head out.
"Im not fit to be a warrior, I mean look at me?"
Featherpaw looks at her puzzled, "you seem fine to me, I dont follow?"
She stood up trying to get to his hieght, "your tall im short, very short, unlike my brothers. Especially Scalepaw who should snap out of it!" feathertail cranks his head over to Scalepaw who just stood their. "somethings gotten into him im not sure what?" She sighed and give out a fustrated grunt.
"but anyways changing topic, your a great warrior and I have to say your a better hunter than I am, I mean you can track anything better than your brothers can" Feathertail leaped up on my paws and giving out a playful stance, "you know what lets race!, I bet I could sprint farther than you can" he pointed at the boulder of vitallity.
She gave out a snckering glare and lashed her tail out, "your on!" but as soon as they were about to run Iceshade stumbled out from the bush and made us almost stampered right over her. She drew back her ears, alomost like Featherpaw was about to ram into her.
"S-sorry I didnt see ya their" he apologizes to her, Reedpaw follows second.
"Reedpaw, featherpaw? What are you two up to?" shacking her pelt and standing tall she licks the top of Reedpaw head, "aww hows my daughter doing?" she looks at Featherpaw, shacking away and fixing herself from embarrisement.
"Mom! Im not a Kit!" she meowed. Iceshade purred and looks at Feathertail while Reedpaw fixes herself.
"And how are you today?" she asked Featherpaw, "you seem to be in a happy mood lately? How was the patrol with Groundtail?"
"Excellent!" he meowed excitingly, "you wont believe the fish that I caught, He taught be ablut the technique right after we started to reset the border markers, it was a big one too and it put up a fight to go back into the water" he placed an immitation by swipping it to the ground, "Bit it down like this and then it slapped me a good few times around the sheek, but I was too quick and tore its side apart to were it wont be able too....well you know" Iceshade couldnt help but bring out a murrow in laughter.
"That is excellent I am proud of you, were is this fish right now if I may ask" she asked.
"well... I gave it to Mirrorpaw, she ate it" he gave out a small nip in front of Reedpaw, "like this" he teased as Reedpaw cuffed him lightly on his back.
"Well make sure that story stays with you till you grow old, now Reedpaw, I heard about what happened earlier" she shivered and bows her head in shame.
"im sorry mom, I didnt mean to give out our position... I... I was scared a bit, froze" she explained about the accessment and the mistake she did.
"you have no reason to be ashamed of" she mewwed, "I am proud you took this mistake for it shows that you still have alot to learn, but fear is very normal" she stood pver her daughter, "if a warrior does not gain fear, then he lacks safety and common sense for himself and others" Featherpaw stood by her and gave her a shove.
"hey want to know a small secret?" he asked her ash she nodded, suprise to think she is a wimp, "when Grountail first taught me how to fish, I fell into the river, like not even a monn before I was apprenticed, but ever sice I scare to go into raging rivers, it taught me to be very careful when fishing. Its fun but can be dagerous as well" he meowed.
"I just dont like to go full on into battle" she mewed as Iceshade lick her head once more, but she didnt flinch.
"I know and in most hearts, no one want to fight, especially to the death. Not even the bravest of warriors could consume the bearing of killing any of our own for so long Remembering this will make you into a very wise and smart cat, keep your brothers safe by giving them the right advice. Especially Wolfpaw" hse pointed out.
"uhh I had enough talk with Wolfpaw, he thinks I'm helpless..." she gives out a grim face, then sadness struck her as she remembers about the assessment. "I wish he took me seriously instead of treating me like im useless.."
"Reedpaw your not useless, I told you that several times already"he growled, "you know what, hows about I teach ya how to fish like Grountail taught me" he stood forward standing proud over her. "bet once I teach ay you probably couldnt catch more than me"
Her spirit started to shine again and and gave a competative stare, "once again your on!" she broke away from her mother and stood bye him.
"oh and remember this, your not the only one who has ever failed an assessment" she pointed out then grinned a bit, "your fauther..umm Teaterclaw was a huge clumby furball, failed almost every assessment Ashclaw could give him" she laughs and licks her paw, "now look at what he has become, he is a hero and you never know you might be one as well"
"r-really?" she widened her eyes and stared at Featherpaw for a moment, "thanks mom, I will do everything I can learn into being a warrior, and when that day comes i will serve my clan with the highest respect" she leap off and started heading for the forest, "hey what you doing im still ahead of you on the race!"
As she storms off Featherpaw gave out a grunt, "hey you cheated! Stuby legs!"
but as they left they forgot the real secret message what will unfold into these young heroes, "world of adolescence, world of adolescence, world of adolescence, the black dust will rise from hell" Scalepaw wispered and walks around the camp, unnoticed by anyone, "someone is going to die today, the claw will reach its thorns, the sever beats the mouth....death.....death..."
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To be continued...
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